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Hello, Helene, I think it's been a while since we last spoke
Oh, Helene, why does it seem that it's your heart that was broke
Instead of the vase that you, without cause, knocked over when you left
You left me sad, instead of glad, of love I was bereft

Hey, Helene, what did you mean when you said "love is dead and gone"
My Helene, I saw the dean; on your step, the man stood on
Am I forgotten in the hot and blistering sun of day
Sweet Helene, my tongue is wiped clean and I am short of words to say

Well, Helene, you know it was me who gave you all my love
But Helene, now I am seen as free as a spring-hatched dove
My heart is now in a bond with a fair, young blonde
Who will love me back, in days glad or black, and be my good wife, so fond
©2007-2009 ~GothiqueHobbit
:icongothiquehobbit:

Author's Comments

Ack! Bad rhyming! Well, it's not too bad, I guess. But what do you think? I wrote this while watching a production of Shakespeare's "King Richard III" (on YouTube).

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:iconkackmura:
ooo i like it!

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-"Love your self even when you think no one else does"-
:icongothiquehobbit:
Thank you. What do you like about it (be descriptive, or you get no cookies!)

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People living deeply have no fear of death.- Anais Nin
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We need to be the change we wish to see in the world.- Mohandas K. Gandhi
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When Life does not find a singer to sing her heart she produces a philosopher to speak her mind.- Kahlil Gibran
:iconkackmura:
It is very flowing, and you can picture it like a play in your head. *cookies???*

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-"Love your self even when you think no one else does"-
:icongothiquehobbit:
Thank you. Well, I did write it while watching a play. :p

Yes, cookies. Chocolate chocolate-chip.

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People living deeply have no fear of death.- Anais Nin
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We need to be the change we wish to see in the world.- Mohandas K. Gandhi
---
When Life does not find a singer to sing her heart she produces a philosopher to speak her mind.- Kahlil Gibran
:icongothiquehobbit:
Thanks! Why's it awesome?

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People living deeply have no fear of death.- Anais Nin
---
We need to be the change we wish to see in the world.- Mohandas K. Gandhi
---
When Life does not find a singer to sing her heart she produces a philosopher to speak her mind.- Kahlil Gibran
:iconkackmura:
*tackles you* OMG *runs off*

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-"Love your self even when you think no one else does"-
:icongothiquehobbit:
XD

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People living deeply have no fear of death.- Anais Nin
---
We need to be the change we wish to see in the world.- Mohandas K. Gandhi
---
When Life does not find a singer to sing her heart she produces a philosopher to speak her mind.- Kahlil Gibran

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